review and fix the three new apt-transport- manpages

References: https://lists.debian.org/debian-l10n-english/2018/01/msg00002.html

1 files changed, 110 insertions, 100 deletions

diff --git a/doc/po/fr.po b/doc/po/fr.po
index 2d180679a..6f267a2ee 100644
--- a/doc/po/fr.po
+++ b/doc/po/fr.po
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ msgid ""
 msgstr ""
 "Project-Id-Version: apt-doc 1.0.5\n"
 "Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: APT Development Team <deity@lists.debian.org>\n"
-"POT-Creation-Date: 2018-01-03 22:34+0000\n"
+"POT-Creation-Date: 2018-01-17 19:04+0100\n"
 "PO-Revision-Date: 2017-01-24 22:43+0100\n"
 "Last-Translator: Jean-Pierre Giraud <jean-pierregiraud@neuf.fr>\n"
 "Language-Team: French <debian-l10n-french@lists.debian.org>\n"
@@ -9877,20 +9877,20 @@ msgstr ""
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 "HTTP is an unencrypted transport protocol meaning that the whole "
 "communication with the remote server (or proxy) can be observed by a "
-"sufficiently capable attacker referred to commonly as man in the middle "
-"(MITM).  Such an attacker can <emphasis>not</emphasis> modify the "
-"communication to compromise the security of your system through as APTs data "
+"sufficiently capable attacker commonly referred to as a \"man in the middle"
+"\" (MITM).  However, such an attacker can <emphasis>not</emphasis> modify "
+"the communication to compromise the security of your system, as APT's data "
 "security model is independent of the chosen transport method. This is "
-"explained in detail in &apt-secure;. An overview over available transport "
+"explained in detail in &apt-secure;. An overview of available transport "
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-"Various options are available to modify its behaviour which can be set in an "
-"&apt-conf; file ranging from proxy configuration to workaround for specific "
-"server insufficiencies."
+"Various options can be set in an &apt-conf; file to modify its behavior, "
+"ranging from proxy configuration to workarounds for specific server "
+"limitations."
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@@ -9904,17 +9904,17 @@ msgstr "Configuration utilisateur"
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 "The environment variable <envar>http_proxy</envar> is supported for system "
-"wide configuration.  Proxies specific to apt can be configured via the "
+"wide configuration.  Proxies specific to APT can be configured via the "
 "option <literal>Acquire::http::Proxy</literal>.  Proxies which should be "
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-"control can be achieved via proxy autodetection detailed further below.  All "
-"these options use the URI format <literal><replaceable>scheme</"
+"control can be achieved via proxy autodetection, detailed further below.  "
+"All these options use the URI format <literal><replaceable>scheme</"
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-"<literal>https</literal>.  Authentification details can be supplied via &apt-"
+"<literal>https</literal>.  Authentication details can be supplied via &apt-"
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@@ -9923,8 +9923,8 @@ msgstr ""
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 "The various APT configuration options support the special value "
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-"environment variable <envar>no_proxy</envar> with the same propose is also "
-"supported."
+"environment variable <envar>no_proxy</envar> is also supported for the same "
+"purpose."
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@@ -9939,7 +9939,7 @@ msgstr ""
 #| "store the requested archive files in its cache, which can be used to "
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-"Further more there are three settings provided for cache control with "
+"Furthermore, there are three settings provided for cache control with "
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@@ -9983,8 +9983,8 @@ msgstr "Configuration utilisateur"
 #| "<literal>ProxyAutoDetect</literal>."
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 "<literal>Acquire::http::Proxy-Auto-Detect</literal> can be used to specify "
-"an external command to discover the http proxy to use. The first and only "
-"parameter is an URI denoting the host to be contacted to allow for host-"
+"an external command to discover the HTTP proxy to use. The first and only "
+"parameter is a URI denoting the host to be contacted, to allow for host-"
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@@ -10073,14 +10073,23 @@ msgstr ""
 
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+#, fuzzy
+#| msgid ""
+#| "The setting <literal>Acquire::http::Pipeline-Depth</literal> can be used "
+#| "to enable HTTP pipelining (RFC 2616 section 8.1.2.2) which can be "
+#| "beneficial e.g. on high-latency connections. It specifies how many "
+#| "requests are sent in a pipeline.  APT tries to detect and workaround "
+#| "misbehaving webservers and proxies at runtime, but if you know that yours "
+#| "does not conform to the HTTP/1.1 specification pipelining can be disabled "
+#| "by setting the value to 0. It is enabled by default with the value 10."
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+"pipeline.  APT tries to detect and work around misbehaving webservers and "
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-"HTTP/1.1 specification pipelining can be disabled by setting the value to 0. "
-"It is enabled by default with the value 10."
+"HTTP/1.1 specification, pipelining can be disabled by setting the value to "
+"0. It is enabled by default with the value 10."
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 "Le réglage <literal>Acquire::http::Pipeline-Depth</literal> permet "
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@@ -10116,7 +10125,7 @@ msgstr ""
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 msgid ""
 "<literal>Acquire::http::SendAccept</literal> is enabled by default and sends "
-"a <literal>Accept: text/*</literal> header field to the server for requests "
+"an <literal>Accept: text/*</literal> header field to the server for requests "
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@@ -10157,18 +10166,18 @@ msgstr ""
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-"Secure protocol (HTTPS) also referred to as HTTP over TLS. It is available "
-"by default since apt 1.5 and was before that available in a <package>apt-"
-"transport-https</package> package. Note that a transport is never called "
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+"called directly by a user but used by APT tools based on user configuration."
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+"layer known as Transport Layer Security (TLS) to provide end-to-end "
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-"The HTTPS protocol is based on the HTTP protocol and as such this "
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@@ -10199,13 +10207,13 @@ msgid ""
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-"If you need to support multiple authorities, the only way is to concatenate "
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+"certificates (in PEM format)  concatenated together to create the chain "
+"which APT should use to verify the path from your self-signed root "
+"certificate. If the remote server provides the whole chain during the "
+"exchange, the file need only contain the root certificate. Otherwise, the "
+"whole chain is required. If you need to support multiple authorities, the "
+"only way is to concatenate everything."
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-"When authenticating the server, if the certificate verification fails for "
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+"During server authentication, if certificate verification fails for some "
+"reason (expired, revoked, man in the middle, etc.), the connection fails.  "
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-"is for debugging or testing purpose only as it removes all security provided "
-"by the use of HTTPS."
+"what you are doing, setting this option to \"<literal>false</literal>\" "
+"allows you to skip peer certificate verification and make the exchange "
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+"removes all security provided by the use of HTTPS."
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-"the identity in its certificate, you can set the option to \"false\", which "
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+"the identity in its certificate, you can set the option to \"<literal>false</"
+"literal>\", which will prevent the comparison from being performed."
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-"HTTPS supports authentication based on client certificates as well via "
+"Besides supporting password-based authentication (see &apt-authconf;) HTTPS "
+"also supports authentication based on client certificates via "
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+"SSLKey</literal>. These should be set respectively to the filename of the "
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@@ -10311,26 +10319,27 @@ msgstr ""
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+"transports like &apt-transport-http;. The basic functionality has been "
+"available since apt 0.7.24, but was undocumented until apt 1.6 which "
+"contained a complete rework of the transport and its supported features. "
+"Note that a transport is never called directly by a user but used by APT "
+"tools based on user configuration."
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+"If the acquisition of a file via a mirror fails, the method ensures that "
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@@ -10340,7 +10349,7 @@ msgstr ""
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+"is based entirely on the mirrors offered in the mirrorlist and the files APT "
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+"either tabs or spaces.  (This is an advanced feature only available with apt "
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+"feature.)"
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